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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, November 10, 2021

JJ's Online Writing

Group 2 Reading group read a story called 'The Little Yellow Chicken' who had a party with his friends.  As a follow-up to their reading, JJ wrote a story about his party experience:

"On Sunday it was my uncle's birthday and we had a bbq. Then we had a cake with some ice-cream."

Friday, February 19, 2021

Principal's Award: Isyss

 
Today, Isyss received a Principal's Award for independently putting an idea into a sentence during story writing. Tino Pai!

Friday, September 4, 2020

Jonathan's Is A Star

Jonathan received a principal's award for choosing the best words for his writing. 
Tino pai, Jonathan!

Luke's Father's Day Story

Luke received a Thank you! award for his piece of writing on his Dad. Lucky Luke gets to play rugby with his hard-working dad. 

Ano te pai, Luke!

Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Conservation Week: Eva's Story on Recycling

Conservation is an important part of our environmental learning. Eva and her family know bottles, cans, paper and plastic are things that need to be recycled. There's Eva in the picture sorting out her recycling items.
Ano te pai, Eva!

Monday, August 24, 2020

A Digital Principal's Award for Oshin 👏

 

At last Friday's virtual assembly Oshin received a principal's award which recognised her achievement in her online learning. In writing, she had to think about using a different sentence starter for every sentence.

Ano te pai, Oshin! 

Thursday, August 20, 2020

The Cooking Pot by JJ

JJ had to write about a favourite character from a Sunshine Classics story. You're right JJ, Mrs Spot certainly can bake anything.

Ka Pai for completing your writing task, JJ!
 

Tuesday, August 18, 2020

Eva's Character


What a lovely story Eva. I like how you started each sentence with a different word. You achieved your learning goal. I agree with you that Mrs Mack is  pretty.  
Ka pai Eva!

Friday, August 7, 2020

Losaline Recieves a Principal's Award 👏

 

This morning Losaline was recognised for her awesome effort in writing independently. She has been working towards writing at least two sentences without the teacher's help. Ano te pai, Losaline!

Wednesday, July 29, 2020

We are learning to: choose the best words for our writing

 

I can hear whispers in my ears. I can hear the wind. I hear the owl at night.

Written by Losaline

Tuesday, June 23, 2020

Word Endings



 

We have been learning how to read and say different word endings. During the Orange's reading session, we picked out words from our book and circled the endings. The children read the whole word and sounded the ending out to the group. Ka Pai Luke, Hine, Eva and Oshin! 

Story Writing with Miss Kingston

This morning our tamariki went outside. Together we looked around us at all the things we could do. The tamariki pointed at the grass and said it was sparkling. The children picked up the grass and felt the droplets of water, we talked about dew and when it forms. We saw the flowers in the garden bed. Our learners used their senses of smell, sight and touch to examine the flowers and the grass. Here are some stories that the children wrote.  
By Miss Kingston. 

The Pretty Flowers 
Today we went outside and we were in front of Room Six and we smelt the flowers and it smelt beautiful. 
By Sione. 



Today outside we looked at the flowers. We found water on the grass and felt the flowers and the grass, it was wet.  By Hineiturama. 


Today outside we saw the sun shining on the grass. We went to the grass and we went to the garden by Room 6. By Oshin.


The Pretty Flower 
Today me and my class went outside and we smelt the flowers and do you know that it makes me sneeze? By Anthony.


Flowers 
We picked up a flower and we smelt the flowers. It smelt like flowers and we passed them to each other.
By Pele. 

Wednesday, May 13, 2020

Oshin's Home Learning

Oshin is working very hard on her home learning. She is focusing on her writing, handwriting, maths and visual arts. I am very pleased to see you learn independently. 
Ka pai Oshin! 

Monday, November 25, 2019

Where is Mrs Golder? by Farhan

Today Mrs Golder is probably sick with a cold. She is probably at the doctor's and she has some medicine for a sore throat. I miss Mrs Golder very much.

Where is Mrs Golder? by Jonathan

I think she is at home in bed sleeping with her blanket. When Mrs Golder wakes up she will have medicine.

Harvesting The Snow Peas by Leroy

We harvested the snow peas with the scissors. We cut the stem off the plant. We opened the snow pea pods. We ate the peas.

Thursday, August 8, 2019

Writing by Farhan


Mrs Folu helps us all the time. She makes us better than before all the time. In the classroom we do writing together.